Here's a new excerpt from my medieval historical romance, The Snow Bride. 
The hero and heroine are in a tower belonging to their enemy, the 
necromancer.
Excerpt.
Making torches, lighting them, took some little 
time. Magnus could sense Elfrida's tension and almost see her fears tearing 
at her like the harpies preyed on their hapless victims in the old tales that 
he had heard around campfires in Outremer. She stayed within the tower, 
calling encouragement to Christina and praying aloud, "To cleanse this 
space," she told him. She did not attempt to move farther than the few steps 
they had come from the threshold, for which he was grateful.
"Your sister 
must be sleeping deeply," he said when she fell silent and
despondent after 
no replies. "It is the time of winter dark and solid slumber."
"Or she is 
drugged," Elfrida answered.
Once he spotted her gazing at him, a cool, 
farsighted, assessing stare. Where he
considered pits and traps, she 
concerned herself with magical dangers. He knew
she felt responsible for his 
safety, a strange and queer reversal of nature to
him, but one he accepted 
that he could not shake her from.
All will be better with more light, he told 
himself, fending off a vague feeling
of being watched.
Baldwin finally 
brought two spitting torches. Magnus told the youth to keep up
and took a 
torch from him. "Do you stay here?" he asked Elfrida.
She shook her head—he 
had not expected otherwise—and he put her between himself
and Baldwin. 
Leading the way, Magnus began to pick a careful path across the
nails and 
snares and wooden stakes, walking steadily and lifting his feet high.
All the 
while, puffing like a small, furious dragon at his back, he could 
hear
Elfrida and sense her taut, barely reined-in impatience. She fairly 
bristled
with it. Not far and all will be well, he wanted to say to comfort 
her, but he
said nothing, for they had reached the stairs, and it might not 
be true.
Gray, narrow, worn, and unlit, the stairs were also slimy on certain 
treads.
Spilled oil or melted candle wax? he speculated, calling out softly 
in the old
tongue and his own dialect, so Baldwin would know, "Grease, here, 
step over." He
did not lower his torch. Some things were best left as a 
mystery.
"Christina, you are safe, beloved. Walter is waiting for you, and 
all is
prepared for your return."
Elfrida was becoming more urgent and 
desperate in her wishes. He longed to
shield her from this trial but knew it 
was impossible.
She is a warrior of magic, besides, and a warrior always 
faces things. She would
never forgive me if I kept her out of this.
Yet it 
was so ponderous, step after step, climbing in the dark, with the stair
walls 
and roof feeling to close in around them, pressing down and choking...
Unless 
that is just me. Since early youth he had loathed shut-in places, which
was 
why in any siege he had always volunteered for any digging or mining. Now
the 
disgusting, spineless fears of his boyhood shook down the backs of his 
legs.
If Christina is dead, will Elfrida blame me? No, she will not..
He 
trod on an object that cracked and slithered beneath his peg foot. He 
checked
the cry bubbling in his throat and kicked the unknown thing away, 
down the
stairs. He heard it flopping into the darkness and vowed to burn the 
whole tower
with fire once they were done.
If Christina is dead or alive, 
will Elfrida return to her village? Will she want
to stay there? Ask her, 
man, and find out!
He was wary of asking and at the same time eager to ask. 
As much as Elfrida
wanted to see her sister, he wanted to know her 
mind.
It is my future. Have the stakes ever been so high?
He ran up three 
more steps and reached the first floor. The staircase continued
higher, but 
now there was a tiny, cramped passageway, again unlit, and at its
end, a 
door.
A blue door, he realized, hearing Elfrida's gasp of recognition. He 
spun about
and gripped her shoulder tightly, in a gesture of warning and 
support, then let
her go.
He reached out and touched the door with his 
stump. Elfrida said nothing, did
not try to stop him, but he glanced at her 
for confirmation.
She nodded, her own hands clenched in tight fists, her face 
unreadable.
"Baldwin." He handed the lad his torch and set his shoulder to 
the door, drawing
out his knife—better a knife than a sword in such close 
quarters.
Surprise was impossible, for if there was a guard, he must have 
heard their
plodding trail, so Magnus called a final warning.
"Release 
your prisoners unharmed and you shall not be injured or killed. 
Yield
now."
He pushed on the stout wood, astonished to find the door 
unlocked, and entered.
* * * *
The Snow Bride
http://www.bookstrand.com/the-snow-bride
Lindsay 
Townsend
http://www.lindsaytownsend.net
Wednesday, August 22, 2012
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